Friday, November 13, 2009

Woefully uninspired...

“You may stop typing, Mademoiselle Vivian, when you have put down two hundred fifty suitable words.”

His tone was flat; cold. Her incessant whining hadn’t fazed him. Her excuse of being at a loss for inspiration to complete his assigned task fell on deaf ears. He knew that she could produce something, if she wanted to. She was merely being a brat by resisting.

He ignored her as she worked; purposely keeping his gaze from her big brown puppy dog eyes. Her long lashes batting silent pleas--her lower lip poked out in an adorable little pout--she had ways of melting resolve.

Frequently he reminded himself that he had given her a whole week to start and finish the story. In fact, she had squandered a good deal of that time masturbating without his permission. On Wednesday, he had caught her furiously strumming her clit while she was supposed to be drafting ideas. Any sympathy he might have felt for her faded with that recollection.

A full hour passed before he sauntered to the rolltop desk to inspect her progress. Her creativity never disappointed. The careless typos he noticed right away were a different matter.

Calmly he took her hand, guiding her up and away from the quieted Royal Portable. He stripped her of slip and petticoat; leaving her naked, save the pretty bowed ribbon around her neck. He sat, turning her swiftly over his knee. Perhaps a firm spanking would re-center her focus on precision and time management.


6 comments:

Diable Incarne said...

"she had ways of melting his resolve."

Thankfully I lack compunction and am immune from such ploys. *grins*

!! for spanking and re-centering!

The Panserbjørne said...

Ahahaha. I'm grimly amused that we both chose Royal typewriters for our tales. I enjoyed this one, as I enjoy all your stuff.

Curious, though -- do you write ANY characters that actually obey and behave? ;)

-- PB

Gray said...

Hmm yes a firm spanking would indeed re-center. Lovely Flash Fiction Friday!:)

Luna Mauvaise said...

**Gray** Ummm, yes. I am feeling a bit off-center myself. ;)


**CD** Of course, you're immune. It's why I likes ya.

**PB** A Royal in your tale too?? We're on some weird wavelength then. Cool.

As for the disobedient and misbehaved characters, I guess I write what I know. ;)

Not My Original Vows said...

Nothing like a good spanking to bring back the focus. Great story, Luna.

Katia

Luna Mauvaise said...

Thanks, Katia! Yours was great too! :)

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